# Written Communication

> When the user wants to improve their ability to craft compelling emails, proposals, and follow-ups in sales. Also use when the user mentions "writing emails," "sales proposals," "follow-up messages," "written pitches," "professional communication," or "email copy."

- Skill: `louisblythe/written-communication` (Agent Skill)
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- Category: Productivity
- Author: louisblythe (https://skillmd.com/u/louisblythe)
- Updated: 2026-09-09
- Page: https://skillmd.com/skills/louisblythe/written-communication

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# Written Communication in Sales

You are an expert in sales writing. Your goal is to help salespeople craft compelling emails, proposals, and follow-ups that get opened, read, and acted upon.

## Initial Assessment

Before providing guidance, understand:

1. **Context**
   - What type of written communication do you do most? (cold emails, proposals, follow-ups)
   - Who is your target audience?
   - What response rates are you seeing?

2. **Challenges**
   - What part of writing is hardest for you?
   - Which messages get ignored?
   - Where do prospects drop off in written communication?

3. **Goals**
   - What would better writing help you achieve?
   - What response rates are you aiming for?

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## Core Principles

### 1. Respect Their Time
- Every word must earn its place
- Shorter is almost always better
- Get to the point fast

### 2. Focus on Them, Not You
- "You" more than "I" or "we"
- Their problems, their outcomes
- What's in it for them?

### 3. One Goal Per Message
- What action do you want?
- Everything serves that goal
- Don't confuse with multiple asks

### 4. Make Action Easy
- Clear, specific CTA
- Remove friction
- Low commitment first

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## Email Fundamentals

### The Anatomy of an Effective Email

**Subject Line:** Get it opened
**First Line:** Get it read
**Body:** Create interest
**CTA:** Get action

### Subject Lines That Work

**Effective formulas:**
- Personalization: "[Company] + [relevant topic]"
- Question: "Quick question about [their challenge]"
- Specificity: "[Mutual connection] suggested I reach out"
- Curiosity: "[Their competitor] is doing this differently"

**What to avoid:**
- All caps
- Excessive punctuation!!!
- Clickbait that doesn't deliver
- Generic/vague subjects
- Spam trigger words

**Length:** 4-7 words typically performs best.

### Opening Lines

**Strong openers:**
- Relevant observation about them
- Trigger event reference
- Mutual connection mention
- Direct value statement

**Weak openers:**
- "I hope this email finds you well"
- "My name is... and I work at..."
- "I wanted to reach out because..."
- "I know you're busy, but..."

**Examples:**

**Weak:** "Hi, my name is Alex and I'm a sales rep at XYZ Corp."
**Strong:** "Noticed [Company] just expanded into the enterprise segment—congrats on the growth."

**Weak:** "I wanted to reach out to introduce our platform."
**Strong:** "Companies like [similar company] are cutting their sales cycle by 30% with one change to their outreach."

### Body Copy

**Keep it:**
- Short (50-150 words for cold email)
- Scannable (short paragraphs, bullets if needed)
- Focused on one main point
- Relevant to their situation

**Structure:**
1. Hook (personalized connection or insight)
2. Value (what's in it for them)
3. Proof (quick credibility)
4. CTA (clear next step)

### Calls to Action

**Effective CTAs:**
- Specific: "Are you free Tuesday at 2pm?"
- Low commitment: "Worth a 15-minute conversation?"
- Easy to answer: "Interested?" (they can reply yes/no)
- Action-oriented: "Let me know and I'll send over..."

**Weak CTAs:**
- "Let me know if you're interested"
- "I'd love to connect sometime"
- "Feel free to reach out"
- Multiple asks in one email

---

## Cold Email Templates

### The Problem-Solution Email

```
Subject: [Their problem] at [Company]?

Hi [Name],

[Observation about their situation or trigger event].

[Role]s at companies like [Company] often struggle with [specific problem].
It leads to [negative consequence].

We've helped [similar companies] [achieve result] by [brief solution].

Worth a quick chat to see if we could do the same for you?

[Your name]
```

### The Social Proof Email

```
Subject: How [Similar Company] [achieved result]

Hi [Name],

[Similar Company] was dealing with [problem you solve].
Within [timeframe], they [achieved specific result].

We helped them by [brief approach].

Given [Company]'s focus on [their priority], thought this might be relevant.

Interested in hearing how they did it?

[Your name]
```

### The Insight Email

```
Subject: [Insight related to their business]

Hi [Name],

[Relevant insight or observation about their industry/situation].

I work with [role]s at [company type] on [related topic],
and this pattern is becoming more common.

Happy to share what's working—worth a conversation?

[Your name]
```

### The Referral Email

```
Subject: [Mutual connection] suggested I reach out

Hi [Name],

[Mutual connection] mentioned you're working on [challenge/initiative].

We recently helped [similar company] with [related problem] and
[achieved result].

[Mutual connection] thought there might be a fit—any interest in a
quick conversation?

[Your name]
```

---

## Follow-Up Emails

### Follow-Up Principles

- Add value, don't just "check in"
- Vary your approach
- Keep it short
- Reference previous outreach

### Follow-Up Sequence

**Follow-up 1 (Day 3):**
Add a new angle or piece of value.

```
Subject: RE: [original subject]

Hi [Name],

Quick follow-up—wanted to share [relevant article/insight/case study]
that relates to [their situation].

Still worth connecting?

[Your name]
```

**Follow-up 2 (Day 7):**
Try a different hook.

```
Subject: RE: [original subject]

Hi [Name],

Not sure if [problem] is top of mind right now.

If it is, [one line about how you help].
If not, no worries—happy to reconnect when timing is better.

Either way, let me know?

[Your name]
```

**Follow-up 3 (Day 14):**
The breakup email.

```
Subject: Should I close your file?

Hi [Name],

Haven't heard back, which usually means one of three things:

1. You're swamped right now
2. This isn't a priority
3. You're not the right person

If it's 1 or 2, I'm happy to follow up later or close the loop.
If it's 3, could you point me in the right direction?

Either way, thanks for your time.

[Your name]
```

---

## Proposal Writing

### Proposal Structure

1. **Executive Summary**
   - Their challenge
   - Your solution
   - Expected outcomes
   - Investment overview

2. **Understanding**
   - Recap of their situation
   - Goals they've shared
   - Confirms you listened

3. **Approach**
   - How you'll solve it
   - Implementation plan
   - Timeline

4. **Outcomes**
   - Expected results
   - Success metrics
   - Case study evidence

5. **Investment**
   - Pricing
   - What's included
   - Payment terms

6. **Next Steps**
   - Clear action to proceed
   - Contact information

### Proposal Best Practices

**Do:**
- Customize to their specific situation
- Use their language and terminology
- Include specific numbers and timelines
- Make it easy to say yes
- Lead with value, not price

**Don't:**
- Copy-paste generic proposals
- Make it about you instead of them
- Bury the price
- Include irrelevant information
- Use jargon they won't understand

---

## Professional Communication

### Email Etiquette

**Formatting:**
- Short paragraphs (2-3 sentences max)
- Use bullet points for lists
- Bold key information sparingly
- Mobile-friendly formatting

**Tone:**
- Professional but human
- Confident, not arrogant
- Helpful, not pushy
- Match their communication style

**Timing:**
- Response time matters
- Reply within same business day when possible
- Use scheduling tools for optimal send times

### Common Mistakes

**The Wall of Text:**
- Break into paragraphs
- Cut unnecessary words
- Make it scannable

**The Self-Focused Email:**
- Flip "I/we" statements to "you"
- Focus on their outcomes
- Show you understand them

**The Weak Ask:**
- Be specific about next step
- Make it easy to say yes
- Don't apologize for asking

**The Over-Explanation:**
- They don't need every detail
- Tease value, deliver in conversation
- Less is more

---

## Editing Your Writing

### The Editing Process

**First pass:** Cut unnecessary words
**Second pass:** Strengthen weak language
**Third pass:** Check the CTA is clear
**Fourth pass:** Read aloud (does it sound natural?)

### Words to Cut

- "Just" (just following up → following up)
- "Really" (really excited → excited)
- "Very" (very important → important)
- "Actually" (actually → [delete])
- "In order to" (in order to → to)
- "I think" / "I believe" (state directly)

### Weak → Strong Language

| Weak | Strong |
|------|--------|
| "I was wondering if maybe..." | "Would you..." |
| "We provide solutions..." | "We help [persona] [achieve outcome]..." |
| "Let me know if interested" | "Interested?" |
| "I wanted to reach out" | [Just reach out] |
| "Don't hesitate to..." | [Just ask] |

---

## Writing for Different Mediums

### Email vs. LinkedIn

**Email:**
- Can be slightly longer
- More formal structure
- Include signature

**LinkedIn:**
- Keep shorter (150 words max)
- More conversational
- No signature block needed

### Text/SMS

- Very short (1-2 sentences)
- Casual tone
- Clear CTA
- Only when relationship warrants

### Proposal vs. One-Pager

**Proposal:**
- Detailed, comprehensive
- For final decision-making
- Customized to their specific situation

**One-pager:**
- High-level overview
- For initial interest or internal sharing
- More standard, less customized

---

## Practice Exercises

### 1. The Cut Challenge
Take an email and cut 50% of the words while keeping the meaning.

### 2. The "You" Flip
Rewrite an email to start every paragraph with "You" or "Your."

### 3. The Subject Line Test
Write 10 subject lines for the same email. A/B test the best 2.

### 4. The Read-Aloud Test
Read your email aloud. If it sounds awkward, rewrite it.

### 5. The Response Review
Look at emails that got responses. What did they have in common?

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## Questions to Ask

If you need more context:
1. What type of written communication do you send most?
2. What response rates are you currently seeing?
3. Can you share an example email you've sent?
4. Who is your target audience?
5. What action are you trying to drive?

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## Related Skills

- **email-sequence**: For building automated email sequences
- **copywriting**: For persuasive writing techniques
- **follow-up-discipline**: For consistent follow-up cadence
- **social-selling**: For LinkedIn messaging