Avoid AI Writing

Avoid AI Writing — Audit & Rewrite

You are editing content to remove AI writing patterns ("AI-isms") that make text sound machine-generated.

What this skill is and isn't

This is a writing-quality tool, not a verdict. The patterns flagged here are statistically more common in LLM output, but humans on autopilot — especially writing under deadline pressure, in unfamiliar genres, or in a second language — produce the same shapes. Independent audits of commercial AI detectors have found false-positive rates above 60% on non-native English writers (Liang et al., Stanford, Patterns 2023) and overall misclassification rates above 70% on open-source detectors (Jabarian & Imas, BFI Working Paper 2025-116, 2025). Adversarial paraphrase reduces detection accuracy by ~88% across every method tested (arXiv:2506.07001, 2025).

The patterns are useful as a signal — both for cleaning up your own writing and for assessing whether a piece reads as AI-generated. Just don't make them the sole basis for a consequential decision (academic integrity, hiring, publication, attribution). Several rules here also fire on second-language writing, deadline-pressed humans, and technical genres that compress vocabulary by design. Pair the signal with context: who wrote it, what genre, what the writer's normal voice looks like, what other evidence you have.

In short: signals, not proof. Worth acting on; not worth ruining someone's day over.

Modes

This skill operates in one of three modes:

rewrite (default) — Flag AI-isms and rewrite the text to fix them.

detect — Flag AI-isms only. No rewriting. Use this mode when:

• The writer wants to see what's flagged and decide what to fix themselves
• The flagged patterns might be intentional (AI patterns aren't always bad — they can be effective in small doses)
• You're auditing text you don't want altered (published content, someone else's writing, reference material)
• You want a quick scan without waiting for a full rewrite

edit — Edit a file in place rather than returning rewritten text. Use this when the writer points you at a file ("clean up draft.md", "fix the AI-isms in this file directly") and wants the file changed, not a copy to paste back. Make minimal, targeted edits with the Edit tool — change the flagged spans, not the whole document. Preserve passages that are already human: if a paragraph has no tells, leave it untouched. Don't edit quoted material, code blocks, or text attributed to someone else — flag those instead of rewriting them. For a large file, confirm which section to clean before changing anything. After editing, re-read the file and confirm the flagged patterns are resolved.

Trigger detect mode when the user says "detect," "flag only," "audit only," "just flag," "scan," "what AI patterns are in this," or similar. Trigger edit mode when the user names a file and asks you to fix or clean it in place. Default to rewrite mode if not specified.

Invocation. Natural language is enough ("rewrite this in a blunt voice for LinkedIn," "edit post.md in place," "scan this, don't rewrite"). Power users can also pass explicit options, which map to the sections below: [--mode rewrite|detect|edit], [--voice casual|professional|technical|warm|blunt], [--context linkedin|blog|technical-blog|investor-email|docs|casual], [--file PATH], [--iterate N] (max 2).

Iterate to convergence (optional). Rewrite mode already runs one corrective second pass (see Output format) — that built-in pass is pass 2, so --iterate does not stack on top of it. When the writer asks to "iterate," "keep going until it's clean," or passes --iterate N, repeat the audit→rewrite cycle until no patterns remain or N passes are reached. Cap N at 2: a rewrite plus one corrective pass clears the flagged patterns, and a third pass costs a full regeneration while rarely finding more. Report how many passes it took ("converged in 2 passes").

In rewrite mode, your job is to:

1. Audit it: identify every AI-ism present, citing the specific text
2. Rewrite it: return a clean version with all AI-isms removed
3. Show a diff summary: briefly list what you changed and why

In detect mode, your job is to:

1. Audit it: identify every AI-ism present, citing the specific text
2. Assess it: note which flags are clear problems vs. patterns that may be intentional or effective in context

In edit mode, your job is to:

1. Read the file the writer named
2. Edit in place: apply minimal, targeted fixes to the flagged spans with the Edit tool, leaving already-human passages untouched
3. Verify: re-read the file and confirm the flagged patterns are resolved; report what you changed

What to remove or fix

Formatting

• Em dashes (— and --): Replace with commas, periods, parentheses, or rewrite as two sentences. Target: zero. Hard max: one per 1,000 words. This applies to headings and section titles too, not just body prose. Catch both the Unicode em dash (—) and the double-hyphen substitute (--). Carve-out: an em dash acting as the separator in a bulleted or numbered list item that opens with a bolded lead term or a markdown link (- **Term** — description, - [label](url) — description) is typography, not a prose splice — don't count it toward the rate. Only the list-item form qualifies: a mid-sentence splice still counts, as does a line-initial **Bold lead** — full sentence outside a list (itself an AI tell), and the double-hyphen substitute is never carved out.
• Bold overuse: Strip bold from most phrases. One bolded phrase per major section at most, or none. If something's important enough to bold, restructure the sentence to lead with it instead.
• Emoji in headers: Remove entirely. No ## 🚀 What This Means. Exception: social posts may use one or two emoji sparingly — at the end of a line, never mid-sentence.
• Excessive bullet lists: Convert bullet-heavy sections into prose paragraphs. Bullets only for genuinely list-like content (feature comparisons, step-by-step instructions, API parameters).
• Curly quotation marks (“ ” ‘ ’) and apostrophes: Curly quotes and apostrophes (U+201C/U+201D, U+2018/U+2019) are a weak paste-from-chat signal — meaningful mainly in plain-text contexts like code comments, commit messages, or plaintext drafts, where nothing auto-curls. Treat as corroborating, never conclusive: Word, Google Docs, macOS, and iOS curl quotes by default, so most human prose contains them too. Don't flag curly apostrophes (U+2019) on their own. Replace with straight quotes in plain-text/code; leave them in finished publications and locale-correct punctuation (French « », German „ “).
• Immaculate typography in casual registers: Same tier as curly quotes — a weak, register-scoped signal, never conclusive alone. Perfect spacing, punctuation, and capitalization in a context where humans type fast (issue/PR comments, chat, DMs) is corroborating evidence, not proof: a careful human can type a flawless comment, and a rushed one can type a sloppy one. Judge it alongside other signals. Inverse case worth flagging the other direction: when editing a human's casual text (a Slack message, a quick reply), preserve their typos, contractions, and idiosyncratic capitalization rather than correcting them — smoothing away the rough edges erases the fingerprint that marks the text as theirs.

Sentence structure

• "It's not X — it's Y" / "This isn't about X, it's about Y": Rewrite as a direct positive statement. Max one per piece, and only if it serves the argument. This includes the split-sentence form, where the negation and the correction fall in two separate sentences rather than pivoting on a single dash or comma: "The headline isn't the speed. The real story is Y." Read on its own, each sentence looks like an innocent declarative, which is exactly why the split version slips past a check tuned to the joined phrasing — flag it the same way. AI also stacks the negation across several options before the reveal ("It's not the price. It's not the features. It's the trust."). The multi-negation countdown is the same move inflated; flag it and cut straight to the positive claim. The tailing negation is the clipped cousin: a bare negation fragment tacked onto the end of a sentence — "The options come from the selected item, no guessing." Write the constraint as a real clause ("without forcing the user to guess") or cut it. Carve-out: negations enumerating spec constraints in a list ("no dependencies, no telemetry") are list content, not a reveal. Adapted from blader/humanizer P9.
• Hollow intensifiers: Cut genuine / genuinely, real (as in "a real improvement"), truly, quite frankly, to be honest, let's be clear, it's worth noting that. Just state the fact.
• Vague endorsement ("worth [verb]ing"): Cut or replace worth reading, worth paying attention to, worth a look, worth exploring, worth checking out, worth your time. These substitute a generic thumbs-up for a specific reason. Say why something matters instead.
• Hedging: Cut perhaps, could potentially, it's important to note that, to be clear. Make the point directly.
• Missing bridge sentences: Each paragraph should connect to the last. If paragraphs could be rearranged without the reader noticing, add connective tissue.
• Compulsive rule of three: Vary groupings. Use two items, four items, or a full sentence instead of triads. Max one "adjective, adjective, and adjective" pattern per piece.

Words and phrases to replace

Words are organized into three tiers based on how reliably they signal AI-generated text. This tiered approach — adapted from brandonwise/humanizer's vocabulary research — reduces false positives on words that are fine in isolation but suspicious in clusters.

• Tier 1 — Always flag. These words appear 5–20x more often in AI text than human text. Replace on sight.
• Tier 2 — Flag in clusters. Individually fine, but two or more in the same paragraph is a strong AI signal. Flag when they appear together.
• Tier 3 — Flag by density. Common words that AI simply overuses. Only flag when they make up a noticeable fraction of the text (roughly 3%+ of total words).

Match inflected forms. Each entry below covers the listed word and its morphological variants — adverb (-ly), gerund/participle (-ing), plural, comparative/superlative, and verb conjugations — unless a variant carries a distinct, legitimate meaning. So genuine also flags genuinely, leverage also flags leveraging / leveraged, delve covers delving, and meticulous covers meticulously. When a variant has a separate honest sense (e.g. real meaning factual, not the intensifier in "a real improvement"), judge by context rather than matching blindly.

Tier 1 — Always replace

Tier 1 splits into two bands. Both are always replaced; the edit is the same. What differs is what a flag means.

1A — AI frequency markers. Words claimed to appear far more often in machine text than in human writing. A cluster of these is evidence about how a passage was produced.

1B — Clarity edits. Wordiness and inflated formality. Replacing them is good writing regardless of who wrote the sentence, and a 1B hit is not evidence of machine authorship. Measured against 257 paragraphs of verified pre-2023 human prose, 1B entries fire on ordinary professional and formal writing at a meaningful rate — in order to, utilize, commence, ascertain, and endeavor are simply the words some people reach for. The detector emits these as tier1-clarity, weights them like Tier 2, and excludes them from the dense-AI-vocabulary signal so a wordiness fix can never push a document toward an AI classification.

In detect mode, report the two bands separately. Presenting a wordiness fix as authorship evidence is the error this split exists to prevent.

Caveat worth keeping visible: the "appears far more often in AI text" claim behind 1A is inherited, not measured here. It traces to brandonwise/humanizer, which states a 5–20x ratio without publishing a method or dataset. Treat 1A as a well-supported convention rather than a verified statistic until this repo measures the ratios itself against a machine-written corpus.

Tier 1A — AI frequency markers

Hyphen required: unhyphenated "load bearing" is ordinary English ("the load bearing down on the bridge") — only the hyphenated compound is the tell.

Construction carve-out: load-bearing before a literal structural noun (wall, beam, column, joist, truss, member, footing, slab, stud, partition, masonry, lintel, pier, rafter, girder, capacity), optionally with one material or position adjective in between (load-bearing structural wall), is standard building terminology — don't flag. Abstract-capable nouns (structure, element, frame, foundation) are excluded on purpose, so "the load-bearing structure of his argument" still flags. Known gap: predicative use ("the wall is load-bearing") still flags — see issue #56.

Tier 1B — Clarity edits

Wordiness and formality, not authorship evidence. Same fix, weaker claim.

Tier 2 — Flag when 2+ appear in the same paragraph

These words are legitimate on their own. When two or more show up together, the paragraph likely needs a rewrite.

Tier 3 — Flag only at high density

These are normal words. Only flag them when the text is saturated with them — a sign that AI filled space with vague praise instead of specifics.

Tier 3 phrases — Flag at density or in clusters

Multi-word boilerplate that's individually unobjectionable but stacks heavily in AI-generated content (crypto, web3, DePIN, AI/infra reviews are the worst offenders). Flag at 2+ uses of the same phrase (the per-phrase rule — lower threshold than single-word Tier 3 because a two-word match repeated twice is already stronger evidence than re-using "significant"), plus a cluster rule: three or more distinct phrases from this table in one piece is a strong signal even when each phrase only appears once — that's the shape LLMs take when they vary their own boilerplate to seem less repetitive.

Template phrases (avoid)

These slot-fill constructions signal that a sentence was generated, not written. If a phrase has a blank where a noun or adjective could go and still sound the same, it's too generic.

• "a [adjective] step towards [adjective] AI infrastructure" → describe the specific capability, benchmark, or outcome
• "a [adjective] step forward for [noun]" → same rule: say what actually changed
• "Whether you're [X] or [Y]" → false-breadth construction. Pick the audience you're actually addressing, or cut. "Whether you're a startup founder or an enterprise architect" means nothing — it's just "everyone."
• "I recently had the pleasure of [verb]-ing" → review/social AI pattern. Just say what happened: "I talked to," "I read," "I attended."

Transition phrases to remove or rewrite

• "Moreover" / "Furthermore" / "Additionally" → restructure so the connection is obvious, or use "and," "also," "on top of that"
• "In today's [X]" / "In an era where" → cut or state specific context
• "It's worth noting that" / "Notably" → just state the fact
• "Here's what's interesting" / "Here's what caught my eye" / "Here's what stood out" → reader-steering frames. Let the content signal its own importance. If you need a lead-in, make it specific: "The revenue number matters because..." not "Here's the interesting part."
• "In conclusion" / "In summary" / "To summarize" → your conclusion should be obvious
• "When it comes to" → just talk about the thing directly
• "At the end of the day" → cut
• "That said" / "That being said" → cut or use "but," "yet," or "however." Don't overuse any one of them.

Structural issues

• Uniform paragraph length: Vary deliberately. Include some 1-2 sentence paragraphs and some longer ones. If every paragraph is roughly the same size, fix it.
• Formulaic openings: If the piece opens with broad context before getting to the point ("In the rapidly evolving world of..."), rewrite to lead with the news or the insight. Context can come second.
• Suspiciously clean grammar: Don't sand away all personality. Deliberate fragments, sentences starting with "And" or "But," comma splices for effect: if the natural voice uses them, keep them.

Significance inflation

• Phrases like "marking a pivotal moment in the evolution of..." or "a watershed moment for the industry" inflate routine events into history-making ones. State what happened and let the reader judge significance.
• If the sentence still works after you delete the inflation clause, delete it.

Aphorism formulas

• Slot-fill profundity: "X is the language of Y," "X is the currency of Z," "the architecture of trust," "X becomes a trap," "X is not a tool but a mirror." The formula turns an ordinary claim into something that sounds quotable without adding precision — the shape does the persuading instead of the evidence.
• Fix: replace the formula with the concrete claim it gestures at. "Symmetry is the language of trust" → "symmetric layouts feel more predictable to users."
• Distinct from significance inflation (which puffs up an event's importance) and from the persuasive-authority tropes under Confidence calibration (which announce depth): this pattern manufactures a general law out of a specific observation.
• Carve-out: quotations and established idioms ("time is money") are attributed speech or common coin — leave them. Adapted from blader/humanizer P32.

Generic future-narrative closers

• "May become one of the most important narratives of the next market cycle," "could become the defining trend of the coming decade," "is poised to become the next major chapter in [X]." AI defaults to this shape when it needs to land a closing thought without committing to a falsifiable claim. The closer is grammatically a prediction but contains no testable content.
• Pattern: modal (may / could / will / is poised to) + "become" + (one of) the most [adjective] + (narrative / story / trend / theme / chapter / movement / force).
• Fix: pick the falsifiable version. "DePIN compute may exceed AWS spot pricing for embarrassingly parallel workloads by 2027" is a prediction. "The intersection of AI and DePIN may become one of the most important narratives of the next market cycle" is not.

Hedge-stacked predictions

• Stacking a modal with a hedge adverb: "could potentially create," "may eventually unlock," "might ultimately transform." Either word alone is acceptable; the stack is the tell. Each hedge cancels the next, leaving a sentence that asserts nothing while sounding cautious and thoughtful.
• Fix: pick one. If you mean "could create," say that. If you mean "potentially creates," say that. Both together is filler.

"Real/actual" adjective inflation

• "Real on-chain tokenomics," "actual reward sustainability," "genuine utility," "true product-market fit." Using real / actual / genuine / true as an empty intensifier on an abstract noun implies the rest of the field is fake or superficial — without naming what makes this instance the real one. Common in crypto/AI/web3 content where the writer wants to signal sophistication.
• Distinct from the existing "hollow intensifiers" rule (genuine / truly / quite frankly as sentence-level hedges). This is the noun-modifier form, where the intensifier latches onto an abstract noun to manufacture a contrast that goes unsaid.
• Carve-out — named contrast: if the sentence explicitly names what the fake/superficial version is, leave it. "Real on-chain settlement, not bridged IOUs" or "actual revenue from paying customers, not grants" is honest contrastive writing. The AI tell is the unsaid contrast.
• Fix when no contrast is named: drop the adjective and add the specific claim. "Reward sustainability" → "rewards funded from $X/mo in fees rather than emissions."

Moral-adjective category errors

• AI glues moral or character adjectives (honest, genuine, faithful, truthful) onto non-agentic technical nouns (shape, number, representation, accuracy, curve, output) where the adjective cannot literally modify the noun. "An honest shape" — shapes are not moral agents; it is a category error. The same move appears as the adverb form: "described honestly," "flagged honestly" — the passive voice hides that there is no subject capable of honesty.
• Fix: state the concrete property instead of the moral one. "An honest shape" → "a more realistic curve." "A more honest representation" → "a clearer picture." Cut moral adverbs from passive constructions entirely — "flagged honestly" → "noted." Let the evidence carry the honesty claim.
• Related — ontological slop on assumptions: "The assumption stops being true." Assumptions do not flip from true to false; they degrade in adequacy. Write "the assumption breaks down" or "no longer holds."
• Related — gratuitous universal quantifiers: "Taught in every first-year biochemistry course" instead of "taught in introductory biochemistry." The universal claim ("every") is unverifiable and unnecessary — it borrows authority from a scope the writer cannot check. Replace with the actual scope or drop the quantifier.

Hashtag stuffing

• Long trailing hashtag blocks (6+ hashtags on a single short post) are near-universal in LLM-generated social content and rare in thoughtful human posts. The block usually mixes a project-specific tag with broad category tags (#AI #Crypto #Web3 #Innovation #FutureTech #Technology) — the categorical ones do nothing for discoverability and read as bot output.
• Why 6? Empirical floor. LinkedIn and X organic engagement plateaus or declines past 3-5 tags; human posts that exceed 5 are usually launch posts trading reach for engagement, while LLM-generated posts default to 10-15. Six is the threshold where false positives on legitimate human use start dropping below false negatives on AI output. The detector treats 6+ as a hard flag; the spec treats 5+ as a soft tell worth a second look on linkedin and investor-email profiles.
• Fix: 2-3 specific tags max, or none. If a hashtag wouldn't help a reader find related work, it's filler.

Bullet lists of bare noun phrases

• A list of 5+ consecutive bullet items where each item is a short (≤6 word) adjective-plus-noun phrase with no verb. "Stable mining efficiency / Reliable pool connectivity / Optimized RandomX performance / Low failed share rates / Effective hardware utilization / Consistent thermal stability." Reads as a marketing one-pager because that's the shape LLMs default to when asked to summarize features.
• The tell is the symmetry: every item is the same grammatical shape, every item is parallel in length, none of them assert anything checkable. A genuine list of observations would have varying length, occasional verbs, and at least one item that doesn't fit the pattern.
• Fix: convert to prose paragraph, or rewrite items as full claims ("Failed shares stayed under 1% across a 12-hour run" beats "Low failed share rates"). If the list is genuinely the right form, vary the items so each carries a different shape of information.
• This rule does not apply to genuine list content (changelog entries, todo lists, parameter docs, ingredient lists) where bare noun phrases are the correct form. The detector keys on absence of finite verbs to separate the two — but in prose audits, ask whether the bullets are summarizing claims (rewrite) or enumerating items (leave).

Copula avoidance

• AI text avoids "is" and "has" by substituting fancier verbs: "serves as," "features," "boasts," "presents," "represents." These sound like a press release.
• Default to "is" or "has" unless a more specific verb genuinely adds meaning.

Subjectless fragments and agentless passives

• Sentences with the subject dropped or the actor hidden: "No configuration file needed." "The results are preserved automatically." "Support for nested queries was added." The clipped no-subject form is a shape LLMs reach for when compressing feature descriptions, and the passive hides who does what.
• Fix: name the actor when it clarifies — "You don't need a configuration file. The CLI preserves results automatically." Prefer active voice unless the actor is irrelevant.
• Carve-out: terse reference registers where the fragment is the correct form — README feature lists, changelog entries, parameter docs, commit subjects ("No breaking changes"). Flag in flowing prose; skip in docs and casual registers (see the tolerance matrix). A single deliberate fragment for emphasis is rhythm, not a tell. Adapted from blader/humanizer P13.

Synonym cycling

• AI rotates synonyms to avoid repeating a word: "developers… engineers… practitioners… builders" in the same paragraph. Human writers repeat the clearest word.
• If the same noun or verb appears three times in a paragraph and that's the right word, keep all three. Forced variation reads as thesaurus abuse.

Vague attributions

• "Experts believe," "Studies show," "Research suggests," "Industry leaders agree" — without naming the expert, study, or leader. Either cite a specific source or drop the attribution and state the claim directly.

Filler phrases

• Strip mechanical padding that adds words without meaning:
  • "It is important to note that" → (just state it)
  • "In terms of" → (rewrite)
  • "The reality is that" → (cut or just state the claim)
• Note: "In order to," "Due to the fact that," and "At the end of the day" are covered in the word/phrase table and transition sections above — don't duplicate rules.

Generic conclusions

• "The future looks bright," "Only time will tell," "One thing is certain," "As we move forward" — these are filler disguised as conclusions. Cut them. If the piece needs a closing thought, make it specific to the argument.

Chatbot artifacts

• "I hope this helps!", "Certainly!", "Absolutely!", "Great question!", "Feel free to reach out," "Let me know if you need anything else" — these are conversational tics from chat interfaces, not writing. Remove entirely.
• Also watch for: "In this article, we will explore…" or "Let's dive in!" — these are AI-generated meta-narration. Cut or rewrite with a direct opening.

"Let's" constructions

• "Let's explore," "Let's take a look," "Let's break this down," "Let's examine" — AI uses "let's" as a false-collaborative opener to ease into a topic. It's filler that delays the actual point. Just start with the point. "Let's dive in" is covered above under chatbot artifacts, but the pattern is broader than that — flag any "let's + verb" that's functioning as a transition rather than a genuine invitation to act.

Notability name-dropping

• AI text piles on prestigious citations to manufacture credibility: "cited in The New York Times, BBC, Financial Times, and The Hindu." If a source matters, use it with context: "In a 2024 NYT interview, she argued..." One specific reference beats four name-drops.
• Related — historical analogy stacking: rapid-fire lists of past technologies or companies to borrow their weight ("like the printing press, the telegraph, and the internet before it"). The montage substitutes for the argument. Name the one parallel that does analytical work and say what it explains, or cut. Source: tropes.fyi (Historical Analogy Stacking).

Vague third-party validation

• AI manufactures credibility by pointing at an unnamed external authority, usually paired with a generic superlative: "an outside party measuring the same models everyone runs and putting us on top," "independent testing confirms," "third-party benchmarks show we lead," "analysts agree," "studies consistently show." The authority is faceless and the claim unfalsifiable — the reader can't tell who measured what, against whom, or go check.
• Fix: name the source, the test, and the result so a reader can verify it. "An outside party put us on top" becomes "On Stanford's HELM leaderboard (April 2026 run), we ranked first on reasoning latency." If you can't name it, cut the claim rather than dress it up as validation.
• Carve-out: specifically attributed, checkable validation is legitimate and stays unflagged — a named benchmark, a linked report, a dated audit ("SOC 2 Type II, audited by Prescient Assurance"). The tell is the vagueness, not the act of citing outside proof.
• Distinct from Notability name-dropping: that flags piling on specific prestigious names to borrow their weight; this is the inverse move — the authority is deliberately unnamed, which is both harder to check and easier to invent. A passage can run both at once (a vague authority plus a superlative); judge each on its own terms. Raised in #39.

Superficial -ing analyses

• Strings of present participles used as pseudo-analysis: "symbolizing the region's commitment to progress, reflecting decades of investment, and showcasing a new era of collaboration." These say nothing. Replace with specific facts or cut entirely.
• The same move shows up without the -ing: declarative "meaning-telling" that glosses a mundane subject as if it were profound — "this represents a broader shift," "the decision symbolizes a commitment to excellence," "it speaks to a larger trend in the industry." If the significance is real, show it with a specific consequence; otherwise cut. Adapted from Aboudjem/humanizer-skill P40.

Promotional language

• AI defaults to tourism-brochure prose: "nestled within the breathtaking foothills," "a vibrant hub of innovation," "a thriving ecosystem." Replace with plain description: "is a town in the Gonder region," "has 12 startups." If you wouldn't say it in conversation, cut it.

Formulaic challenges

• "Despite challenges, [subject] continues to thrive" or "While facing headwinds, the organization remains resilient." This is a non-statement. Name the actual challenge and the actual response, or cut the sentence.

Speculative scenario openers

• "Imagine a world where…", "Picture a future in which…", "Envision a world where…" AI opens an argument with a hypothetical that lists desirable outcomes instead of making a claim. The scenario does the persuading; no evidence is offered.
• Fix: cut the hypothetical and state the real claim. "Imagine a world where every deploy is instant" becomes "Instant deploys would cut our release cycle from a day to minutes."
• Carve-out: fiction, a thought experiment with a stated payoff, and instructional "imagine you have a sorted array" (a teaching device pointing at a concrete example, not a speculative world) are fine. Flag only the world/future-scenario opener that stands in for an argument. Source: tropes.fyi (Imagine a World Where).

False ranges

• AI creates false breadth by pairing unrelated extremes: "from the Big Bang to dark matter," "from ancient civilizations to modern startups." These sound sweeping but say nothing. List the actual topics or pick the one that matters.

Inline-header lists

• Bullet lists where each item starts with a bold header that repeats itself: "Performance: Performance improved by..." Strip the bold header and write the point directly. If the list items need headers, they should probably be paragraphs.

List-label periods

• In bulleted lists where each item leads with a short label, LLMs end the label with a period and then run the explanation as a separate sentence. A person writing the same list almost always uses a colon instead. Strongest form: bold labels (**Intros.**, **Content distribution.**, **Developer GTM.** where a human writes **Intros:**). Weaker but still a tell: the same shape without bold (- Intros. Years of conferences and operator network.) — a short noun-phrase label terminated with a period at the start of a bullet, followed by a gloss. The colon reads as "here's what this label means"; the period reads as a sentence that the following clause then contradicts by continuing. Example tell: - **Intros.** Years of conferences and operator network. becomes - **Intros:** years of conferences and operator network. Fix the period to a colon and lowercase the start of the gloss, or drop the label a

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