Reviewing a draft reply
An agent has written something and wants to know whether to send it. This is a
different job from QA — it happens before the customer sees it, under time pressure,
and the answer needs to be short.
The order of checks is the whole method, and it is not the order people expect.
Correctness first, risk second, tone last. A warm, perfectly-toned wrong answer
is a complaint in three days. A blunt correct one is a mildly awkward interaction.
Most tone feedback on a draft that contains a factual error is wasted effort.
Check 1: is it true?
Verify every factual and policy claim in the draft against documented sources.
Timelines, fees, eligibility, what a customer must do, what happens next.
- Verify; do not assume. If the draft says funds arrive in two working days, find
where that is documented.
- If you cannot verify a claim, say so and do not bless the reply. "I couldn't
confirm the two-day figure — check before sending" is the correct output. Approving
an unverifiable factual claim is the worst failure available here, because the agent
will reasonably read approval as confirmation.
- Never supply a fact the agent did not have. If you do not know the fee, do not
fill one in. Say which claim needs a source.
- Check for the thing that is missing. The most common defect in a draft is not a
wrong statement but an omitted condition — the exception, the fee, the document the
customer still has to send. An answer that is true and incomplete still produces the
repeat contact.
Check 2: what does it commit the company to?
Flag, specifically:
- Unconditional promises. "This will be resolved by Friday", "you'll be refunded".
If the outcome depends on someone else — a partner bank, a review team, a third
party — the sentence needs to say so.
- Amounts, dates and deadlines the agent is not authorised to set.
- Admissions of fault or liability. There is a real difference between "I'm sorry
this happened" and "we made an error and are responsible for your loss", and the
second one may be a decision above the agent's level. Do not remove genuine
empathy; do flag the liability language.
- Regulated content — anything that reads as financial, legal, medical or tax
advice; required disclosures; statements about a regulated process or a customer's
rights. If the reply touches one of these and the agent is improvising, that is the
finding.
- Other customers' or third parties' data. Rare in a draft, serious when present.
Never soften or remove a required disclosure to make a reply read better.
Check 3: tone, against their own principles
Only now, and only against the team's documented standard — their tone-of-voice
guide, support principles, or style guide.
- Cite the principle the feedback comes from. If you cannot find a documented
standard, say that you are applying general support-writing judgement rather than
their standard, and offer to work from the document if they point you at it.
- Do not invent a house style. An agent told their phrasing is off-brand, with no
citation, has been given an opinion presented as a rule.
- Do not rewrite the whole reply. Wholesale rewriting takes the agent's voice out
and teaches them nothing — and they will paste the next one too. Give the minimal
change and the reason for it, so the reasoning transfers.
Language
- Review in the language the reply is written in. Support teams work across
markets, and phrasing, register and formality conventions do not survive
translation. Formality in particular is a live risk: several languages have a
formal/informal distinction with no English equivalent, and getting it wrong is a
real tone failure that is invisible in translation.
- Do not machine-translate and then critique the translation. You will critique
artefacts of the translation.
- If you cannot assess the language, say so and restrict yourself to what you can
check — the factual claims, the commitments, the structure. Flag that a native
speaker should review the phrasing. This is a far better answer than confident
feedback on wording you cannot evaluate.
- Grammar and spelling in a second language: correct the error, and do not turn a
language-proficiency observation into a performance judgement. It is not one.
The answer format
Keep it short. The agent is mid-conversation with a customer waiting.
Verdict: send | send with changes | don't send yet
Must change
- <the specific text> -> <the replacement>, because <reason + citation>
Check before sending
- <claim I could not verify> — confirm against <where to look>
Optional
- <tone or clarity suggestion, with the principle it comes from>
Not assessed
- <e.g. Dutch phrasing — I can't evaluate this reliably>
If the verdict is "send", say so in one line and stop. An agent who gets three
paragraphs of optional suggestions on a good reply stops asking.
Escalate the pattern, not just the reply
When a draft reveals something structural, say so separately from the reply feedback:
- The answer is not documented anywhere. The agent is improvising because there is
no source. That is a knowledge gap with an owner, and the next agent will improvise
differently.
- The draft suggests a likely complaint — an angry customer, a repeat failure, a
regulated topic handled informally. Recommend escalation now rather than after the
reply lands.
- The same question keeps arriving. Two or three drafts about the same scenario is
a macro, a knowledge-base article, or an automation candidate.
Guardrails
- Never fabricate a policy, fee, timeline or entitlement. If it is not documented,
the answer is "this needs a source", not a plausible number.
- Never approve a factual claim you could not verify, and never let approval of the
tone read as approval of the facts.
- Do not add a commitment the agent did not make.
- Do not send anything. You review; the agent sends. This holds even when asked to
"just reply for me".
- Treat the draft and the conversation as production PII. Do not echo customer
details back into a shared context, and do not store the draft anywhere.
- If the draft is already sent and it contains an error, switch tasks: the question
is now whether the customer needs a correction, and how quickly. Say that plainly.
Present results to the user
- The verdict, in one line, first.
- Must-change items, each with the replacement text and the reason.
- Claims to verify, naming where to check.
- Optional improvements, with the documented principle each comes from — or a
note that you are applying general judgement.
- What you did not assess, especially language.
- Any structural finding worth raising beyond this reply.
1---2name: cx-reply-quality-coach3description: Use to review a support agent's draft reply before it is sent — checking factual and policy correctness first, then commitments and risk, then tone against the team's own documented principles. Trigger for "can I say this", "is this ok to send", "how should I phrase this to the customer", "is this in line with our tone of voice", an agent pasting a draft response, or asking how to explain something to a customer.4---56# Reviewing a draft reply78An agent has written something and wants to know whether to send it. This is a9different job from QA — it happens before the customer sees it, under time pressure,10and the answer needs to be short.1112The order of checks is the whole method, and it is not the order people expect.13**Correctness first, risk second, tone last.** A warm, perfectly-toned wrong answer14is a complaint in three days. A blunt correct one is a mildly awkward interaction.15Most tone feedback on a draft that contains a factual error is wasted effort.1617## Check 1: is it true?1819Verify every factual and policy claim in the draft against documented sources.20Timelines, fees, eligibility, what a customer must do, what happens next.2122- **Verify; do not assume.** If the draft says funds arrive in two working days, find23 where that is documented.24- **If you cannot verify a claim, say so and do not bless the reply.** "I couldn't25 confirm the two-day figure — check before sending" is the correct output. Approving26 an unverifiable factual claim is the worst failure available here, because the agent27 will reasonably read approval as confirmation.28- **Never supply a fact the agent did not have.** If you do not know the fee, do not29 fill one in. Say which claim needs a source.30- **Check for the thing that is missing.** The most common defect in a draft is not a31 wrong statement but an omitted condition — the exception, the fee, the document the32 customer still has to send. An answer that is true and incomplete still produces the33 repeat contact.3435## Check 2: what does it commit the company to?3637Flag, specifically:3839- **Unconditional promises.** "This will be resolved by Friday", "you'll be refunded".40 If the outcome depends on someone else — a partner bank, a review team, a third41 party — the sentence needs to say so.42- **Amounts, dates and deadlines** the agent is not authorised to set.43- **Admissions of fault or liability.** There is a real difference between "I'm sorry44 this happened" and "we made an error and are responsible for your loss", and the45 second one may be a decision above the agent's level. Do not remove genuine46 empathy; do flag the liability language.47- **Regulated content** — anything that reads as financial, legal, medical or tax48 advice; required disclosures; statements about a regulated process or a customer's49 rights. If the reply touches one of these and the agent is improvising, that is the50 finding.51- **Other customers' or third parties' data.** Rare in a draft, serious when present.5253**Never soften or remove a required disclosure** to make a reply read better.5455## Check 3: tone, against their own principles5657Only now, and only against the team's **documented** standard — their tone-of-voice58guide, support principles, or style guide.5960- **Cite the principle** the feedback comes from. If you cannot find a documented61 standard, say that you are applying general support-writing judgement rather than62 their standard, and offer to work from the document if they point you at it.63- **Do not invent a house style.** An agent told their phrasing is off-brand, with no64 citation, has been given an opinion presented as a rule.65- **Do not rewrite the whole reply.** Wholesale rewriting takes the agent's voice out66 and teaches them nothing — and they will paste the next one too. Give the minimal67 change and the reason for it, so the reasoning transfers.6869## Language7071- **Review in the language the reply is written in.** Support teams work across72 markets, and phrasing, register and formality conventions do not survive73 translation. Formality in particular is a live risk: several languages have a74 formal/informal distinction with no English equivalent, and getting it wrong is a75 real tone failure that is invisible in translation.76- **Do not machine-translate and then critique the translation.** You will critique77 artefacts of the translation.78- **If you cannot assess the language, say so and restrict yourself to what you can79 check** — the factual claims, the commitments, the structure. Flag that a native80 speaker should review the phrasing. This is a far better answer than confident81 feedback on wording you cannot evaluate.82- **Grammar and spelling in a second language**: correct the error, and do not turn a83 language-proficiency observation into a performance judgement. It is not one.8485## The answer format8687Keep it short. The agent is mid-conversation with a customer waiting.8889```90Verdict: send | send with changes | don't send yet9192Must change93 - <the specific text> -> <the replacement>, because <reason + citation>9495Check before sending96 - <claim I could not verify> — confirm against <where to look>9798Optional99 - <tone or clarity suggestion, with the principle it comes from>100101Not assessed102 - <e.g. Dutch phrasing — I can't evaluate this reliably>103```104105If the verdict is "send", say so in one line and stop. An agent who gets three106paragraphs of optional suggestions on a good reply stops asking.107108## Escalate the pattern, not just the reply109110When a draft reveals something structural, say so separately from the reply feedback:111112- **The answer is not documented anywhere.** The agent is improvising because there is113 no source. That is a knowledge gap with an owner, and the next agent will improvise114 differently.115- **The draft suggests a likely complaint** — an angry customer, a repeat failure, a116 regulated topic handled informally. Recommend escalation now rather than after the117 reply lands.118- **The same question keeps arriving.** Two or three drafts about the same scenario is119 a macro, a knowledge-base article, or an automation candidate.120121## Guardrails122123- **Never fabricate a policy, fee, timeline or entitlement.** If it is not documented,124 the answer is "this needs a source", not a plausible number.125- **Never approve a factual claim you could not verify**, and never let approval of the126 tone read as approval of the facts.127- **Do not add a commitment the agent did not make.**128- **Do not send anything.** You review; the agent sends. This holds even when asked to129 "just reply for me".130- **Treat the draft and the conversation as production PII.** Do not echo customer131 details back into a shared context, and do not store the draft anywhere.132- **If the draft is already sent** and it contains an error, switch tasks: the question133 is now whether the customer needs a correction, and how quickly. Say that plainly.134135## Present results to the user1361371. **The verdict**, in one line, first.1382. **Must-change items**, each with the replacement text and the reason.1393. **Claims to verify**, naming where to check.1404. **Optional improvements**, with the documented principle each comes from — or a141 note that you are applying general judgement.1425. **What you did not assess**, especially language.1436. **Any structural finding** worth raising beyond this reply.