Writing Style (bjps-writing-style)
A BJPS paper must be readable by a political scientist outside its subfield and outside its country of
study, formatted to Cambridge's house style (Harvard author-date referencing), and disciplined to
the word cap. This skill is about reaching a broad, international readership and respecting the format
— not about generating claims.
When to trigger
- Drafting the introduction, framing the contribution, or final polish
- Over the word cap and needing to cut without losing the argument
- Writing the ≤ 150-word abstract
- Aligning citations/headings/format to Cambridge's house style before submission
Reach the broad, international reader
- Front-load the contribution. By the end of the introduction the reader knows the question, the
argument, the evidence, and why it matters to political science broadly. Don't make a generalist
dig for the "so what."
- Don't assume the country context. A reader unfamiliar with your case should follow the paper;
gloss country-specific institutions and acronyms on first use.
- Minimize subfield jargon or define it on first use; an IR reader should follow a behaviour paper.
- Argument-first prose. Lead with claims; use evidence to support them. Avoid "the data show…"
without saying what they show and why it matters.
- Signpost. Clear section structure so a reader can navigate the argument.
Format to Cambridge house style
- Citations: Harvard author-date in text (e.g.,
(Elster 1983, 174)); reference list with the
Cambridge format (Elster J (1983) Explaining Technical Change. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.).
Keep one consistent style (manage with Zotero/BibTeX). References excluded from the word count.
- Manuscript prep: double spacing, ≥ 12-point type, generous margins; accepted in MS Word or
LaTeX (待核实 current specifics).
- Anonymize: BJPS is double-blind — no author names/affiliations/acknowledgments or funding
notes in the manuscript, no obvious self-references ("as we showed in…"), strip identifying file
metadata, and prepare a separate title page.
- Abstract: ≤ 150 words, stating question, approach, and finding.
Fit the word cap (Research Article ~10,000; Letter ~4,000; caps 待核实)
- Move balance tables, full specs, and extended robustness to the online appendix.
- Cut throat-clearing and literature dumps; engage the debate, not every paper (see
bjps-literature-positioning).
- Tighten footnotes — keep them substantive.
- Prefer one decisive figure to three redundant tables.
Anti-patterns
- A subfield- or country-insider intro that never states wide significance
- Burying the contribution in the middle of the paper
- An abstract over 150 words or one that hides the finding
- Mixed citation styles; acknowledgments or self-references that break anonymity
- Padding a Letter toward Article length
Output format
【Contribution stated by end of intro?】[Y/N]
【Reads past subfield + country?】jargon/institutions glossed? [Y/N]
【Abstract】word count (≤150)
【Word count】Article ~10,000 / Letter ~4,000?
【Harvard author-date + anonymized】[Y/N]
【Next】bjps-transparency-and-data
Writing for two readers at once (BJPS-specific)
Every paragraph in the introduction has two readers: the specialist who knows the frontier, and the
generalist from another subfield or country who must be told why it matters. Satisfy both — name the
frontier and the broad stake. A common failure is writing only for the specialist (the paper reads as
parochial) or only for the generalist (the paper reads as thin). The fix is the wide-interest sentence
early, followed by the precise contribution against the literature.
Calibration anchors (hedged)
- BJPS is international: do not assume the reader knows your country's institutions, parties, or
acronyms — gloss them on first use without padding the word count.
- House style is Harvard author-date, not APSA or Chicago-generic; keep one consistent style, and
remember references are excluded from the word count while footnotes and exhibits are not (待核实 exact
counting rule on the live page).
Supplementary resources
Source: brycewang-stanford/Awesome-Journal-Skills → British-Journal-of-Political-Science-Skills/skills/bjps-writing-style/SKILL.md
1---2name: bjps-writing-style3description: Use when drafting or polishing a British Journal of Political Science (BJPS) manuscript so it reads for a broad, international political-science audience, follows Cambridge's house (Harvard author-date) style, and fits the word caps (Research Articles ~10,000 words; Letters ~4,000; abstract <= 150 words). Tightens prose and format; it does not invent content.4---567# Writing Style (bjps-writing-style)89A BJPS paper must be readable by a political scientist outside its subfield and outside its country of10study, formatted to **Cambridge's house style** (Harvard author-date referencing), and disciplined to11the word cap. This skill is about reaching a broad, international readership and respecting the format12— not about generating claims.1314## When to trigger1516- Drafting the introduction, framing the contribution, or final polish17- Over the word cap and needing to cut without losing the argument18- Writing the **≤ 150-word abstract**19- Aligning citations/headings/format to Cambridge's house style before submission2021## Reach the broad, international reader22231. **Front-load the contribution.** By the end of the introduction the reader knows the question, the24 argument, the evidence, and why it matters to political science broadly. Don't make a generalist25 dig for the "so what."262. **Don't assume the country context.** A reader unfamiliar with your case should follow the paper;27 gloss country-specific institutions and acronyms on first use.283. **Minimize subfield jargon** or define it on first use; an IR reader should follow a behaviour paper.294. **Argument-first prose.** Lead with claims; use evidence to support them. Avoid "the data show…"30 without saying what they show and why it matters.315. **Signpost.** Clear section structure so a reader can navigate the argument.3233## Format to Cambridge house style3435- **Citations**: **Harvard author-date** in text (e.g., `(Elster 1983, 174)`); reference list with the36 Cambridge format (`Elster J (1983) Explaining Technical Change. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.`).37 Keep one consistent style (manage with Zotero/BibTeX). References excluded from the word count.38- **Manuscript prep**: double spacing, ≥ 12-point type, generous margins; accepted in **MS Word or39 LaTeX** (待核实 current specifics).40- **Anonymize**: BJPS is **double-blind** — no author names/affiliations/acknowledgments or funding41 notes in the manuscript, no obvious self-references ("as we showed in…"), strip identifying file42 metadata, and prepare a separate title page.43- **Abstract**: **≤ 150 words**, stating question, approach, and finding.4445## Fit the word cap (Research Article ~10,000; Letter ~4,000; caps 待核实)4647- Move balance tables, full specs, and extended robustness to the **online appendix**.48- Cut throat-clearing and literature dumps; engage the debate, not every paper (see49 `bjps-literature-positioning`).50- Tighten footnotes — keep them substantive.51- Prefer one decisive figure to three redundant tables.5253## Anti-patterns5455- A subfield- or country-insider intro that never states wide significance56- Burying the contribution in the middle of the paper57- An abstract over 150 words or one that hides the finding58- Mixed citation styles; acknowledgments or self-references that break anonymity59- Padding a Letter toward Article length6061## Output format6263```64【Contribution stated by end of intro?】[Y/N]65【Reads past subfield + country?】jargon/institutions glossed? [Y/N]66【Abstract】word count (≤150)67【Word count】Article ~10,000 / Letter ~4,000?68【Harvard author-date + anonymized】[Y/N]69【Next】bjps-transparency-and-data70```7172## Writing for two readers at once (BJPS-specific)7374Every paragraph in the introduction has two readers: the specialist who knows the frontier, and the75generalist from another subfield or country who must be told why it matters. Satisfy both — name the76frontier *and* the broad stake. A common failure is writing only for the specialist (the paper reads as77parochial) or only for the generalist (the paper reads as thin). The fix is the wide-interest sentence78early, followed by the precise contribution against the literature.7980## Calibration anchors (hedged)8182- BJPS is **international**: do not assume the reader knows your country's institutions, parties, or83 acronyms — gloss them on first use without padding the word count.84- House style is **Harvard author-date**, not APSA or Chicago-generic; keep one consistent style, and85 remember references are excluded from the word count while footnotes and exhibits are not (待核实 exact86 counting rule on the live page).8788## Supplementary resources8990- [`../../resources/worked-examples/01-introduction.md`](../../resources/worked-examples/01-introduction.md) — a before→after BJPS-style introduction91- [`../../resources/official-source-map.md`](../../resources/official-source-map.md) — word/abstract caps, Cambridge house style, anonymity9293---9495**Source:** [`brycewang-stanford/Awesome-Journal-Skills`](https://github.com/brycewang-stanford/Awesome-Journal-Skills) → `British-Journal-of-Political-Science-Skills/skills/bjps-writing-style/SKILL.md`