Writing Style (jbv-writing-style)
When to trigger
- The prose buries the entrepreneurial phenomenon under jargon or method detail
- The paper reads as written for one discipline only
- You are tightening the abstract, intro, and discussion before submission
- A reviewer says the argument is "hard to follow" or "the entrepreneurship is lost"
Phenomenon-forward writing
JBV is phenomenon-driven, so the writing must put the entrepreneurial phenomenon first:
- Open on the phenomenon: the first paragraph should make a reader feel the entrepreneurial puzzle (a venture-creation tension, a founder/investor decision under uncertainty), not open on a literature gap or a method.
- Front-load the argument: state the question, the mechanism, and the contribution to entrepreneurship early; do not make the reader wait until the discussion.
- Keep entrepreneurship central in every section — methods and results prose should keep tying back to what is learned about the phenomenon, so the paper never reads as a generic study that happened to use startups.
Write for a multidisciplinary reader
Because JBV spans economics, psychology, and sociology, your reader may not share your home discipline:
- Define discipline-specific constructs on first use; avoid unexplained jargon from one lens.
- When you integrate lenses, signpost the move explicitly so an economist and a psychologist both follow.
Voice: deductive and narrative are both legitimate
JBV welcomes "theories, narratives, and interpretations." Match voice to mode:
- Hypothesis-testing: crisp, active, claim-first sentences; hypotheses stated plainly.
- Narrative/interpretive: a coherent, vivid account is appropriate and valued — but it must still be disciplined theorizing, not storytelling for its own sake.
House style
- Abstract: concise and factual, not exceeding 250 words; convey phenomenon, approach, and contribution.
- References: flexible at first submission if complete and consistent; current Guide for Authors says the journal style after acceptance uses numbered references in square brackets.
- Active voice, present tense for established findings, past tense for what you did.
Checklist
Anti-patterns
- Method-first opening that hides the entrepreneurial stakes.
- Single-discipline jargon that excludes JBV's broader audience.
- Story without theory mistaken for "narrative" — JBV wants disciplined narrative.
- Abstract over 250 words or that omits the contribution.
Style execution pass for Journal of Business Venturing
Treat this skill as an executable review pass, not a prose hint. First lock the entrepreneurial mechanism, level of analysis, evidence design, and boundary conditions for ventures; then judge whether the current manuscript answers the venue's real reader: entrepreneurship reviewers who ask whether the paper advances venture formation, opportunity, founder, or ecosystem theory.
- Do the pass: Rewrite the first two pages so each paragraph starts from the venue-level claim, not from chronology or method inventory; preserve exact source-map limits and move technical overflow to appendix or supplement.
- Return a ledger: give
claim / evidence / risk / manuscript location rows, so the next agent can edit rather than rediscover the issue.
- Sibling guard: compare against Entrepreneurship Theory and Practice for broader entrepreneurship, Strategic Entrepreneurship Journal for strategy interface, AMJ for general management; if a sibling owns the contribution, recommend re-routing before polishing format.
- Stop condition: do not give submission-ready advice until the pack's
resources/official-source-map.md has been checked for volatile rules and the manuscript has one concrete fix for the largest venue-specific risk.
Output format
【Hook】does it open on the phenomenon? fix ...
【Front-loading】question/mechanism/contribution early? ...
【Multidisciplinary clarity】jargon defined; integration signposted ...
【Voice】deductive | disciplined-narrative — consistent? ...
【Abstract】word count ≤250; phenomenon-first? ...
【References】complete/consistent; numbered style ready for revision/proof? ...
【Next step】jbv-submission
Source: brycewang-stanford/Awesome-Journal-Skills → Journal-of-Business-Venturing-Skills/skills/jbv-writing-style/SKILL.md
1---2name: jbv-writing-style3description: Use when polishing the prose of a Journal of Business Venturing (JBV) manuscript — front-loading the entrepreneurial phenomenon, writing for a multidisciplinary audience, honoring JBV's openness to narrative/interpretive voice, and applying Elsevier reference conventions and a ≤250-word abstract. Late-stage polish; do not use as a substitute for a real entrepreneurship-theory contribution (jbv-contribution-framing).4---567# Writing Style (jbv-writing-style)89## When to trigger1011- The prose buries the entrepreneurial phenomenon under jargon or method detail12- The paper reads as written for one discipline only13- You are tightening the abstract, intro, and discussion before submission14- A reviewer says the argument is "hard to follow" or "the entrepreneurship is lost"1516## Phenomenon-forward writing1718JBV is phenomenon-driven, so the writing must put the **entrepreneurial phenomenon first**:1920- **Open on the phenomenon**: the first paragraph should make a reader feel the entrepreneurial puzzle (a venture-creation tension, a founder/investor decision under uncertainty), not open on a literature gap or a method.21- **Front-load the argument**: state the question, the mechanism, and the contribution to entrepreneurship early; do not make the reader wait until the discussion.22- **Keep entrepreneurship central in every section** — methods and results prose should keep tying back to what is learned about the phenomenon, so the paper never reads as a generic study that happened to use startups.2324## Write for a multidisciplinary reader2526Because JBV spans economics, psychology, and sociology, your reader may not share your home discipline:2728- Define discipline-specific constructs on first use; avoid unexplained jargon from one lens.29- When you integrate lenses, signpost the move explicitly so an economist and a psychologist both follow.3031## Voice: deductive and narrative are both legitimate3233JBV welcomes "theories, narratives, and interpretations." Match voice to mode:3435- **Hypothesis-testing**: crisp, active, claim-first sentences; hypotheses stated plainly.36- **Narrative/interpretive**: a coherent, vivid account is appropriate and valued — but it must still be disciplined theorizing, not storytelling for its own sake.3738## House style3940- **Abstract**: concise and factual, **not exceeding 250 words**; convey phenomenon, approach, and contribution.41- **References**: flexible at first submission if complete and consistent; current Guide for Authors says the journal style after acceptance uses numbered references in square brackets.42- Active voice, present tense for established findings, past tense for what you did.4344## Checklist4546- [ ] Opening makes the entrepreneurial phenomenon vivid (not a gap or a method)47- [ ] Question, mechanism, and contribution front-loaded48- [ ] Entrepreneurship stays central across methods/results prose49- [ ] Cross-discipline constructs defined; integration signposted50- [ ] Voice matches mode (deductive crispness vs. disciplined narrative)51- [ ] Abstract ≤ 250 words, phenomenon-first52- [ ] References complete and consistent; numbered style planned for accepted version5354## Anti-patterns5556- **Method-first opening** that hides the entrepreneurial stakes.57- **Single-discipline jargon** that excludes JBV's broader audience.58- **Story without theory** mistaken for "narrative" — JBV wants disciplined narrative.59- **Abstract over 250 words** or that omits the contribution.606162## Style execution pass for Journal of Business Venturing6364Treat this skill as an executable review pass, not a prose hint. First lock the entrepreneurial mechanism, level of analysis, evidence design, and boundary conditions for ventures; then judge whether the current manuscript answers the venue's real reader: entrepreneurship reviewers who ask whether the paper advances venture formation, opportunity, founder, or ecosystem theory.6566- **Do the pass:** Rewrite the first two pages so each paragraph starts from the venue-level claim, not from chronology or method inventory; preserve exact source-map limits and move technical overflow to appendix or supplement.67- **Return a ledger:** give `claim / evidence / risk / manuscript location` rows, so the next agent can edit rather than rediscover the issue.68- **Sibling guard:** compare against Entrepreneurship Theory and Practice for broader entrepreneurship, Strategic Entrepreneurship Journal for strategy interface, AMJ for general management; if a sibling owns the contribution, recommend re-routing before polishing format.69- **Stop condition:** do not give submission-ready advice until the pack's `resources/official-source-map.md` has been checked for volatile rules and the manuscript has one concrete fix for the largest venue-specific risk.7071## Output format7273```74【Hook】does it open on the phenomenon? fix ...75【Front-loading】question/mechanism/contribution early? ...76【Multidisciplinary clarity】jargon defined; integration signposted ...77【Voice】deductive | disciplined-narrative — consistent? ...78【Abstract】word count ≤250; phenomenon-first? ...79【References】complete/consistent; numbered style ready for revision/proof? ...80【Next step】jbv-submission81```8283---8485**Source:** [`brycewang-stanford/Awesome-Journal-Skills`](https://github.com/brycewang-stanford/Awesome-Journal-Skills) → `Journal-of-Business-Venturing-Skills/skills/jbv-writing-style/SKILL.md`