Content Patterns (1-6)
Detailed reference for content-level AI writing patterns. Read the compact summary table in SKILL.md first to identify which patterns apply, then consult this file for rewriting guidance.
1. Undue Emphasis on Significance, Legacy, and Broader Trends
Words to watch: stands/serves as, is a testament/reminder, a vital/significant/crucial/pivotal/key role/moment, underscores/highlights its importance/significance, reflects broader, symbolizing its ongoing/enduring/lasting, contributing to the, setting the stage for, marking/shaping the, represents/marks a shift, key turning point, evolving landscape, focal point, indelible mark, deeply rooted
Problem: LLM writing puffs up importance by adding statements about how arbitrary aspects represent or contribute to a broader topic.
Before:
The Statistical Institute of Catalonia was officially established in 1989, marking a pivotal moment in the evolution of regional statistics in Spain. This initiative was part of a broader movement across Spain to decentralize administrative functions and enhance regional governance.
After:
The Statistical Institute of Catalonia was established in 1989 to collect and publish regional statistics independently from Spain's national statistics office.
2. Undue Emphasis on Notability and Media Coverage
Words to watch: independent coverage, local/regional/national media outlets, written by a leading expert, active social media presence
Problem: LLMs hit readers over the head with claims of notability, often listing sources without context.
Before:
Her views have been cited in The New York Times, BBC, Financial Times, and The Hindu. She maintains an active social media presence with over 500,000 followers.
After:
In a 2024 New York Times interview, she argued that AI regulation should focus on outcomes rather than methods.
3. Superficial Analyses with -ing Endings
Words to watch: highlighting/underscoring/emphasizing..., ensuring..., reflecting/symbolizing..., contributing to..., cultivating/fostering..., encompassing..., showcasing...
Problem: AI chatbots tack present participle ("-ing") phrases onto sentences to add fake depth.
Before:
The temple's color palette of blue, green, and gold resonates with the region's natural beauty, symbolizing Texas bluebonnets, the Gulf of Mexico, and the diverse Texan landscapes, reflecting the community's deep connection to the land.
After:
The temple uses blue, green, and gold colors. The architect said these were chosen to reference local bluebonnets and the Gulf coast.
4. Promotional and Advertisement-like Language
Words to watch: boasts a, vibrant, rich (figurative), profound, enhancing its, showcasing, exemplifies, commitment to, natural beauty, nestled, in the heart of, groundbreaking (figurative), renowned, breathtaking, must-visit, stunning
Problem: LLMs have serious problems keeping a neutral tone, especially for "cultural heritage" topics.
Before:
Nestled within the breathtaking region of Gonder in Ethiopia, Alamata Raya Kobo stands as a vibrant town with a rich cultural heritage and stunning natural beauty.
After:
Alamata Raya Kobo is a town in the Gonder region of Ethiopia, known for its weekly market and 18th-century church.
5. Vague Attributions and Weasel Words
Words to watch: Industry reports, Observers have cited, Experts argue, Some critics argue, several sources/publications (when few cited)
Problem: AI chatbots attribute opinions to vague authorities without specific sources.
Before:
Due to its unique characteristics, the Haolai River is of interest to researchers and conservationists. Experts believe it plays a crucial role in the regional ecosystem.
After:
The Haolai River supports several endemic fish species, according to a 2019 survey by the Chinese Academy of Sciences.
6. Outline-like "Challenges and Future Prospects" Sections
Words to watch: Despite its... faces several challenges..., Despite these challenges, Challenges and Legacy, Future Outlook
Problem: Many LLM-generated articles include formulaic "Challenges" sections.
Before:
Despite its industrial prosperity, Korattur faces challenges typical of urban areas, including traffic congestion and water scarcity. Despite these challenges, with its strategic location and ongoing initiatives, Korattur continues to thrive as an integral part of Chennai's growth.
After:
Traffic congestion increased after 2015 when three new IT parks opened. The municipal corporation began a stormwater drainage project in 2022 to address recurring floods.