Obvious Communication
Based on Obvious Adams by Robert R. Updegraff (1916).
Core Principle
"If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it."
The obvious is nearly always simple—so simple that sometimes a whole generation has looked at it without seeing it.
When to Use
- Writing any message, document, or explanation
- Presenting ideas or proposals
- Simplifying complex topics
- Reviewing your own writing before sending
The Five Tests of Obvious Communication
1. Is It Simple?
If your explanation requires complexity, it probably isn't obvious. Strip away until you reach the essential.
2. Does It Check with Human Nature?
Would you feel comfortable explaining this to your spouse, neighbor, or barber? If you'd hesitate, it doesn't align with how people actually think.
3. Can You Write It in Two-Syllable Words?
Write the idea simply. If it becomes convoluted, the thinking itself is unclear. Clarity in writing reveals clarity in thinking.
4. Does It Explode?
When shared, do people react with:
- "Why didn't I think of that?"
- "That's so obvious!"
- Immediate understanding
Look for that instant recognition of rightness.
5. Is the Timing Right?
The right message at the wrong time isn't obvious. Consider context and readiness.
How to Write Obvious Communication
- Lead with the point. Say the obvious thing first.
- Use plain language. Two-syllable words > jargon.
- Be specific. Vague is never obvious.
- Stop when done. Extra words dilute clarity.
- Test it. Read aloud. Does it explode?
The Hard Part
"Thinking is the hardest work many people ever have to do, and they don't like to do any more of it than they can help."
The obvious requires:
- Deep observation
- Thorough fact-gathering
- Rigorous analysis
- Courage to say something that seems "too simple"
People assume complicated = better. Experts create complexity to justify their value. The obvious cuts through this.
Examples
Bad: "We need to leverage our synergistic capabilities to drive stakeholder alignment across the value chain."
Obvious: "We need to work together better."
Bad: "The implementation timeline is contingent upon resource allocation optimization."
Obvious: "We'll start when we have the people."
Checklist Before Sending
- Could a smart 12-year-old understand this?
- Did I lead with the main point?
- Can I cut any words without losing meaning?
- Would I say this out loud to someone?
- Does it pass the "explosive" test?
Remember
"There is no secret to success. Just do the obvious."
The obvious isn't lazy. It's the hardest work—and the most valuable.