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The Sandwich Method (for sensitive feedback) (+2)

The Sandwich Method (for sensitive feedback)

**What's working:** [Positive observation]
**Suggestion:** [Constructive feedback]
**Potential:** [Encouraging forward look]

Example:

**What's working:** Your executive summary clearly states the problem and proposed solution.
**Suggestion:** Consider adding a brief cost-benefit analysis to strengthen the business case.
**Potential:** With that addition, this proposal would be very compelling for stakeholders.

Options-Based Feedback

Present alternatives rather than single suggestions:

**Current:** [Original text]

**Option A:** [Revision 1]
- Pros: [Benefits]
- Cons: [Drawbacks]

**Option B:** [Revision 2]
- Pros: [Benefits]
- Cons: [Drawbacks]

**Recommendation:** [Which option and why]

Questioning Technique

Guide improvements through questions:

**Questions to consider:**
1. Who is the primary audience for this section?
2. What action do you want readers to take?
3. Is the supporting evidence sufficient for skeptical readers?
4. How does this connect to the previous section?