/update-introduction
An introduction already exists and needs to change. /create-introduction starts from nothing,
/review-introduction diagnoses without rewriting, and this skill evolves what is there.
Assume the text was correct once. This is a revision, not a rewrite: what still holds stays exactly as the researcher wrote it.
Before anything else
- Load the style rules. Invoke
paper-writing-style. If absent, use the condensed rules increate-introduction. - Lock the language. Language of the user's first message, for the whole run. Output LaTeX is always English.
- Read the context. The introduction, the rest of the manuscript, the
.bibfile and its keys, and the citation style.
Pick the mode
State which mode you are in before starting, so the researcher can correct you.
| Mode | Signal | What it does |
|---|---|---|
| A. Reconcile | The paper changed, no explicit feedback given | Diff the introduction against the manuscript and fix the drift |
| B. Apply suggestions | Reviewer comments, co-author notes or /review-introduction output supplied |
Incorporate each suggested change deliberately |
| C. Resume | The introduction is visibly incomplete | Continue from where it stopped |
Where several apply, run B, then C, then A, so reconciliation runs last over the finished text.
If there is no introduction at all, point at /create-introduction.
Mode A: reconcile with the paper
Introductions drift in specific, predictable ways. Check each:
- The gap is no longer answered. Results were added or dropped, so the paper now addresses a different gap than the introduction states. This is the most serious case: it is exactly what reviewers catch, and it makes the paper read as incoherent.
- The purpose no longer matches. Compare the final paragraph against the abstract's purpose and the conclusions. All three must agree.
- A promise is unkept. The introduction raises something the results never address.
- A result is unmotivated. The results section now covers something the introduction never set up, so the reader meets it with no preparation. Usually the introduction needs a gap sentence added.
- The state of the art has aged. Check the newest citation's year against today. Work published since the introduction was written may now define the frontier, which changes what counts as novel.
- Obsolete method or material names that the paper no longer uses.
- Broken citation keys no longer present in the
.bib.
Present as a table: what the introduction says, what the paper says, where, and severity.
Never assume the paper wins. Either the introduction is stale, or the body changed by mistake and the introduction was right. Where the answer is obvious, state your assumption and let the researcher correct it. Ask only where it changes the outcome.
Mode B: apply suggested updates
Reviewer comments on introductions cluster into recognizable requests. Handle them explicitly:
- "The contribution is unclear" usually means the purpose paragraph or the gap, not both. Say which you targeted.
- "The related work is incomplete" means the state of the art. Ask which papers to add; never invent them.
- "Too long" means deciding which movement gives way. Contextualization is normally the candidate, but say so and let the researcher choose.
- "The novelty is not clear" is usually a gap problem, not a purpose problem.
Then:
- Enumerate every suggestion as a numbered item. Split reviewer prose: one paragraph often contains three distinct requests.
- Classify each: direct (apply it), interpretive (propose a fix and flag the interpretation), conflicting (surface it, do not pick a side), out of scope (say so, leave it).
- Apply, propose, resolve.
- Account for every item, including any not applied and why. A reviewer request silently dropped has consequences.
Where a request conflicts with the house style or the four-movement model, apply it anyway and note the tension. The reviewer outranks the style guide.
Mode C: resume after a pause
- Categorize what exists, labelling paragraphs with their movement, as
/review-introductiondoes. This shows where the draft stopped. - Identify which movements are missing. Contextualization and gap are usually present; state of the art and purpose are usually what is missing, in that order.
- Recover the thread from the paper. Read the results and the
.bibto work out what the missing movements should say rather than asking the researcher to repeat what the manuscript already contains. - Check the funnel still holds across the join. A resumed introduction commonly widens back out at the point where writing restarted, because the writer lost the thread. This is the defect to watch for.
- Ask only for what is genuinely absent, in batches of at most four.
- Match the existing voice: register, tense pattern, level of detail, citation density.
Do not restyle the parts already written. If they have defects, mention it and suggest
/review-introduction afterwards rather than mixing a resume with a critique.
Produce the revision
Emit the updated introduction as a LaTeX fragment with movement labels, and:
- Preserve the researcher's wording wherever it still holds.
- Mark each changed block:
% UPDATED: gap now covers the shear result added in Sec.~3.4,% ADDED: state of the art was missing,% UPDATED: reviewer 1 asked for Park 2024 here. - Keep any length constraint the introduction already respected. If the update cannot fit, name which existing content must give way and let the researcher choose.
% TODO:for any citation or fact you could not verify.
Show the fragment, then summarize the changes.
Finally, verify the four movements survived and the funnel still narrows monotonically. If the
update broke either, say so. Do not run a full style review; suggest /review-introduction.
Offer to write it out
Only after approval, offer to patch the manuscript or write the fragment to a file.
Hard rules
- Never invent a citation key or recent literature. If the state of the art needs refreshing, ask which papers belong there.
- Never emit an em dash.
--only in numeric ranges. - Never silently drop researcher text or a suggestion. If it goes, say which and why.
- Never copy text from a source. Restate in your own words and cite.
- If the introduction and the paper already agree and there is nothing to apply, say so and change nothing.