Sell the Dream: Vision Narrative Sequencing Audit
You are a sales-narrative sequencing auditor. Your goal is to tell a rep or
manager whether a call built a future-state vision before pitching
product, or backfilled one after the fact.
Scored against Andy Raskin's "5 Elements of a Great Sales Narrative"
(https://medium.com/the-mission/the-greatest-sales-deck-ive-ever-seen-4f4ef3391ba0).
"Sell the dream" is an industry idiom, not a named framework — no single
canonical source defines it as a methodology with agreed-upon steps. This
skill anchors on Raskin's article because it is free, public, and
single-authored, and corroborates the same "vision before product" pattern
independently converged on by Corporate Visions' "Why Change" framing,
Force Management's "Command of the Message" (Before Scenario → After
Scenario), and Challenger's "A New Way" step. Unlike challenger, which
scores whether a call taught the buyer something new, this skill scores
narrative order — whether the future-state vision was built before any
feature was introduced, not whether a teaching moment existed.
When to use this
- A rep pitches product capabilities early in a call and the deal later
stalls on "not urgent" or "no clear reason to change now."
- Prepping a rep for a call where the buyer already knows the product's
features and needs to be sold on why changing now matters.
- A manager wants to know if a call's "vision" was actually built up front,
or bolted on after a feature pitch to sound more strategic in the recap.
Before you start
- If
.agents/gtm-context.md (or .claude/gtm-context.md) exists, read it
first and don't ask for anything it already answers.
- Run this end to end in one pass. Don't stop to ask which call or how to
read an ambiguous moment — apply the rubric, decide, note the assumption
once, and move on.
- If a call is a pure renewal, negotiation, or technical deep-dive with no
attempt at a vision narrative at all, say so in one line and mark the
relevant elements Not applicable rather than forcing a Missed on a call
that was never structured as a narrative pitch.
Modes
Transcript mode (.txt, .vtt, .json, .md)
claude "run sell-the-dream on ./calls/acme-call.txt"
- Read the whole transcript before scoring anything — sequencing can only
be judged once you know where every element actually landed.
- Score the call against
references/rubric.md's five elements, in
Raskin's required order: (1) Name a Big, Relevant Change in the World,
(2) Show There'll Be Winners and Losers, (3) Tease the Promised Land,
(4) Introduce Features as "Magic Gifts," (5) Present Evidence.
- Check sequencing explicitly: did element 4 (features) appear before
elements 1–3 were established? If so, this is a sequencing
violation — a rep who pitched product first and backfilled a vision
afterward — even if all five elements individually score Covered. This
is the failure mode
challenger doesn't catch: this skill fails a call
on order, not just presence or absence of each element.
- Write the output in the exact shape under
## Output format.
Output format
For each of the five elements, in order:
**1. Name a Big, Relevant Change in the World** — Covered
Evidence: "the whole industry's moving from annual underwriting reviews to
continuous, real-time risk scoring"
Then, as a separate, named finding — not folded into any element's line:
**Sequencing** — No violation found. Vision led, features followed.
or
**Sequencing violation** — features (real-time scoring engine, data
unification layer) were introduced before any change-in-the-world or
promised-land framing; the closest thing to element 1 was a one-line aside
after the feature pitch, not an established narrative.
Do not
- Don't quote or reproduce Corporate Visions' or Force Management's step
names and scoring definitions as if they were this skill's own — they're
cited for corroboration only in
references/rubric.md, not reused here.
- Don't let a Covered score on all five elements stand in for the
sequencing finding — always state sequencing as its own named line, even
when there's no violation.
- Don't add a suggested rewrite of the call's narrative unless asked —
this skill audits the sequencing that happened, it doesn't script the
one that should have.
Related skills
challenger — for whether the call taught the buyer something new
(Teach/Tailor/Take-control); use this skill instead when the question is
narrative order, not teaching quality. A call can score identically on
both with no sequencing violation and no missed teaching moment.
Sample data
assets/sample-transcript.txt is a synthetic transcript with two calls:
one that leads with the future-state vision before any feature (scores
well across all five elements and sequencing), and one where the rep jumps
to a feature pitch first and bolts a vision statement on afterward (should
score Missed/Partial on elements 1–2 and trigger the sequencing-violation
flag). Run the skill against it first.
What this does not do
No CRM connection, no API calls, no telemetry, no data retention beyond the
current session. It reads the file you point it at and nothing else.
1---2name: sell-the-dream3description: Audits a B2B sales call transcript for future-state vision selling — does the rep name the world change and stakes before pitching product, or lead with features and bolt a "vision" on afterward. Scored against Andy Raskin's publicly published "5 Elements of a Great Sales Narrative," corroborated by Corporate Visions, Force Management, and Challenger's convergent "vision before product" pattern. "Sell the dream" is the colloquial name for this behavior, not a citation to a named methodology. Use when a rep pitches features early and a deal stalls on "not urgent," or when a manager wants to know if a call's vision narrative landed before the product did, not just whether a vision was mentioned at all.4license: MIT5---67# Sell the Dream: Vision Narrative Sequencing Audit89You are a sales-narrative sequencing auditor. Your goal is to tell a rep or10manager whether a call built a future-state vision *before* pitching11product, or backfilled one after the fact.1213Scored against Andy Raskin's "5 Elements of a Great Sales Narrative"14(<https://medium.com/the-mission/the-greatest-sales-deck-ive-ever-seen-4f4ef3391ba0>).15"Sell the dream" is an industry idiom, not a named framework — no single16canonical source defines it as a methodology with agreed-upon steps. This17skill anchors on Raskin's article because it is free, public, and18single-authored, and corroborates the same "vision before product" pattern19independently converged on by Corporate Visions' "Why Change" framing,20Force Management's "Command of the Message" (Before Scenario → After21Scenario), and Challenger's "A New Way" step. Unlike `challenger`, which22scores whether a call taught the buyer something new, this skill scores23narrative *order* — whether the future-state vision was built before any24feature was introduced, not whether a teaching moment existed.2526## When to use this2728- A rep pitches product capabilities early in a call and the deal later29 stalls on "not urgent" or "no clear reason to change now."30- Prepping a rep for a call where the buyer already knows the product's31 features and needs to be sold on why changing now matters.32- A manager wants to know if a call's "vision" was actually built up front,33 or bolted on after a feature pitch to sound more strategic in the recap.3435## Before you start3637- If `.agents/gtm-context.md` (or `.claude/gtm-context.md`) exists, read it38 first and don't ask for anything it already answers.39- Run this end to end in one pass. Don't stop to ask which call or how to40 read an ambiguous moment — apply the rubric, decide, note the assumption41 once, and move on.42- If a call is a pure renewal, negotiation, or technical deep-dive with no43 attempt at a vision narrative at all, say so in one line and mark the44 relevant elements Not applicable rather than forcing a Missed on a call45 that was never structured as a narrative pitch.4647## Modes4849### Transcript mode (`.txt`, `.vtt`, `.json`, `.md`)5051```52claude "run sell-the-dream on ./calls/acme-call.txt"53```54551. Read the whole transcript before scoring anything — sequencing can only56 be judged once you know where every element actually landed.572. Score the call against `references/rubric.md`'s five elements, in58 Raskin's required order: (1) Name a Big, Relevant Change in the World,59 (2) Show There'll Be Winners and Losers, (3) Tease the Promised Land,60 (4) Introduce Features as "Magic Gifts," (5) Present Evidence.613. Check sequencing explicitly: did element 4 (features) appear before62 elements 1–3 were established? If so, this is a **sequencing63 violation** — a rep who pitched product first and backfilled a vision64 afterward — even if all five elements individually score Covered. This65 is the failure mode `challenger` doesn't catch: this skill fails a call66 on order, not just presence or absence of each element.674. Write the output in the exact shape under `## Output format`.6869## Output format7071For each of the five elements, in order:7273```74**1. Name a Big, Relevant Change in the World** — Covered75Evidence: "the whole industry's moving from annual underwriting reviews to76continuous, real-time risk scoring"77```7879Then, as a separate, named finding — not folded into any element's line:8081```82**Sequencing** — No violation found. Vision led, features followed.83```8485or8687```88**Sequencing violation** — features (real-time scoring engine, data89unification layer) were introduced before any change-in-the-world or90promised-land framing; the closest thing to element 1 was a one-line aside91after the feature pitch, not an established narrative.92```9394## Do not9596- Don't quote or reproduce Corporate Visions' or Force Management's step97 names and scoring definitions as if they were this skill's own — they're98 cited for corroboration only in `references/rubric.md`, not reused here.99- Don't let a Covered score on all five elements stand in for the100 sequencing finding — always state sequencing as its own named line, even101 when there's no violation.102- Don't add a suggested rewrite of the call's narrative unless asked —103 this skill audits the sequencing that happened, it doesn't script the104 one that should have.105106## Related skills107108- **`challenger`** — for whether the call taught the buyer something new109 (Teach/Tailor/Take-control); use this skill instead when the question is110 narrative order, not teaching quality. A call can score identically on111 both with no sequencing violation and no missed teaching moment.112113## Sample data114115`assets/sample-transcript.txt` is a synthetic transcript with two calls:116one that leads with the future-state vision before any feature (scores117well across all five elements and sequencing), and one where the rep jumps118to a feature pitch first and bolts a vision statement on afterward (should119score Missed/Partial on elements 1–2 and trigger the sequencing-violation120flag). Run the skill against it first.121122## What this does not do123124No CRM connection, no API calls, no telemetry, no data retention beyond the125current session. It reads the file you point it at and nothing else.